Thanks much! The Russian one makes some odd choices (like not bothering to do anything to ь or ъ, or rendering й as j or y depending on which side of a vowel it's on) so I'll keep the link to the other thing for now.
I like the translations, by the way, especially the second one. In the first one I'm confused by the word 'dark'. Right now, after you stumble over it and try to figure out why it's there, it sounds like it's saying "oh, the night was dark, by the way -- in case you couldn't guess." I'm assuming whatever was in the original had some sort of connotation that didn't come through -- you should think about how to make it do that, or scrap the 'dark' entirely.
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Re: (yes it is!)
Date: 2011-03-15 05:05 am (UTC)I like the translations, by the way, especially the second one. In the first one I'm confused by the word 'dark'. Right now, after you stumble over it and try to figure out why it's there, it sounds like it's saying "oh, the night was dark, by the way -- in case you couldn't guess." I'm assuming whatever was in the original had some sort of connotation that didn't come through -- you should think about how to make it do that, or scrap the 'dark' entirely.